The thing that struck me most is the feelings that I felt when I read it out loud. I have told the story a million times but I have never written it down. It is different trying to use descriptive words on paper rather than just speaking it to someone off the top of my head. I liked really reflecting on the story and what happened. The story I want to tell is what you learn from your experiences and how to use what you have learned in everyday life.
I would answer the so what question by just asking the reader to think about what it would be like and just letting them visualize what happened and how I learned from it.
The main thing I am planning on doing is just finishing the story and using more visualizations.
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